Tuesday, January 8, 2008

yeah, another poem

I'll sing you a song
you don't have to listen
even if you do
i know you won't hear

The words that I say
you seem to be missing
they drift right through
just like i feared

sometimes it doesn't turn out the way that we wanted
sometimes it falls through our fingers onto the floor
sometimes it's better to leave it behind us forever
sometimes there can still be something more...

I loved you then
it still hasn't changed
but love is fickle
and moves like the wind

I gave you my heart
and then took it back
can't you see there's
nothing left to give

sometimes life beats us down 'til we're broken
sometimes love mends our souls right up to the break
sometimes words are not possibly enough
but I know you'll be in my heart...always.



okay, so maybe this is a LITTLE more serious than before.
love gabby

8 comments:

The one, the only, ZACH! said...

wow Gabby!!! Ok, no offense, but compared to your lucky charms poem, the lucky charms one was horrible! (that's how good this one is, because I really liked the lucky charms one :) But ya, this was a great poem! It sounds almost like a song too (hint hint, wink wink, *caugh* i saw it on ur piano *caugh*). So if you ever produce this poem *caugh* song *caugh* and make tons of money off it - let me know! haha, I'm totally just kidding, it's a great poem Gabby, I could feel the soulness of it (word?)

ZZ (like ZZTop, ahaha, get it, ahahaha!)

zachslife.com

The one, the only, ZACH! said...

P.S. I liked the word "fickle", it made me giggle! *giggle giggle* I'm a poet and I don't know it! aahahahahahahahahaha!

Sometimes I crack myself up!
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

The one, the only, ZACH! said...

But seriously, on a more serious note (I used serious twice *giggle giggle*) it was a great poem Gabby. Don't think I'm making fun of it, cuz I'm not. Ok, u probably want me to stop tri-posting so I will. See you tomorrow!
Z
(back to one Z)

Anonymous said...

Hey Gab,
Wow! That was really good. And I'm not kidding. It was REALLY good. I read the Lucky Charms poem so many times that now I like it, too. haha,if you keep this up you are going to have to copyright them! (to keep other people from snagging them and making them into best seller songs at iTunes)^_^
I'm looking forward to the next poem!
GREAT JOB!!!
danica

HTH STUDENT said...

yo Gabby! dude that poem was like wow. dude it was so like idk, but i liked it much. any way, later yo!
see you when i do.
peace

o, o and check out Zach's website! its Freakin Sweet!!!!!!!!

bye Gabby

Anonymous said...

hey guys... you all rock! I can't believe you all liked it so much- wasn't it just a little...I dont know, depressing? well Im glad you all a.) liked it or b.) are just too nice- i love you either way.
love gabby!
ps nice triple commenting action zach :)

Anonymous said...

hey gab,
so if I comment three times in a row about how wonderful you are do I get extra credit??
Gab - you rock!
haha
danica
ps. that was once...

HTH STUDENT said...

yo im ur 200th vistor yo!

-booyah